Friday, March 18, 2011

floppy skeleton

made of paper and of screws
I feel forgot and dismembered
I the skeleton wait for the day to scare
I the skeleton am so gray
until the day I become what I am made to be
but all I am is paper and screws, I might not see you. 
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 18, 2011 at 9:38 AM

    Interesting. Nothing wrong with it.

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  2. lovedawgsMarch 18, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    short but good. I would have added more to make the skeleton seem more human and depressed.(p.s. where did you get all of this cool looking pictures?)

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  3. Dalton EldridgeMarch 18, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    Interesting. Seemingly there is nothing wrong with this and congrats.

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